This was a short and sweet story, I enjoyed it! Paris and Bruno are cool, I think I enjoyed them the most out of the cast. Their designs and their dynamic was fun!
Something I appreciate about this VN is how the protagonist's anxieties and insecurities aren't just a tool for a sweeter romance or to drive up empathy from the player, instead, they actually translate to regrets, shame, and actions that can hurt others. I enjoy this as it adds stakes to the story, and makes the protagonist feel more real.
Agatha was super chill about it, but I was actually kind of hoping she'd be at least a bit mad about how this guy needs a 1-on-1 due to his love anxieties in her own wedding, like... girl, it's your wedding! This guy's having a moment and people are making it your issue, while you're dealing with this massive event? At least be like "ok now go have a good time I spent 150 bucks on your dish alone"!
In all seriousness, this was sweet! Good work!
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