Trite, predictable, glacial pacing, hackneyed characters. The best moments in the game are all on the promo page.
This feels very "first pass," like a rough proof of concept that could develop into something with another year of development and a LOT of editing. The best that can be said for the first two chapters is that they manage to check every overused AVN story trope and character stereotype in record time.
The girls are hot, at least when they aren't bright red because you said 'hi' to them.
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