Gorgeous. Oh my golly. Absolutely amazing. I'll definitely be replaying this a bunch. The rewritten demo is great and so is the original!
I think the change to have Jamie be a little pathetic loser honestly gives him more character (and gives him an excuse to REALLY want to run) than just having him be a big bad jackass (he's really well written regardless though!)
Vethna has my heart and soul I LOVE them. I also love the trope of guard and charge, so that MIGHTTT play a teensy tiny role.
TL;DR this game is awesome and I love it
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