I'm not the best at expressing my admiration but wow this was amazing! I haven't seen erotica this well written in a loooong while! 

The characters are very compelling, the look of the game itself is lovely, the story and erotic scenes aren't disconnected pieces, forcefully stuck together with tape and a wish upon a star, as I often see in other works*, but instead are a natural part of one whole. I know I'll be coming back to this one! :D

*Of course "Plot, what plot?" type of erotic stories have their place, and I enjoy them too, but a cohesive piece of erotic fiction is a very pleasant breath of fresh air :3