I hope this rating finds you well. I literally just stopped in the middle of the story to rate and review your AVN due to my current place in the story. I held off from this because I wanted to get further along in the story before I made a judgement on your AVN. But where I am in the story ACTUALLY invoked some emotion from me and I am NOT an emotional person 99% of the time. I nearly cried when the MC and Elsie had to have sex due to Gaia. I did not want their first time to be like that and them being forced to have sex...WHEW! It just hit me hard that their first time, HER first time was forced by an entity that scared her so much. I am glad you wrote it that she enjoyed it though. That made the impact of the hit softened. As I said, being moved by a story is very difficult with me. You succeeded. You have had me laughing the entire story so far and the intrigue of the "who dun it" has kept me enthralled. There is very little that has bothered me about this novel. A few typos here and there, missing words, but they were not big issues that made me throw my hands in the air and say "I quit". The other two things that bothered me have been visual. Some awkward looking nipples and the women's faces look awkward to me. Like looking at the face of that one female puppet from Puppet Master. I know you know what I am talking about. I have caught nearly every joke that would go over a younger generations head, so you MUST know the Puppet Master movies. lol. Their "Cheshire smiles" just do not seem natural. Not enough emoting with eyes and mouths. Oh. And the "IS IT THE SHOES!" comment made me wat to break out my SEGA and play NBA Jam sooooooo bad! lol. At any rate, this has been over all a fantastic AVN and I look forward to reading even more of it. Going to get back to it now.

Sincerely, Revan Dryke