I'm left a bit wanting with that cliffhanger ending, but once we got past that slow start things smoothly fell into place. That's where the language felt clumsiest to me, but I think as "sins" go, that's a minor one.

There's some nice art and I like the motif of the moth alongside the spider, although I wonder how the bird plays into that paradigm and why the visitor couldn't be moth(s?) instead. If its a fight between rival gods, I wonder if it could have been a bit more overt in the symbology (given bird doesn't seem to mesh into the same theming).

I think the abrupt endings where you capitulate make sense, but I kind of would have liked one liner endings instead methinks, to reinforce how those outcomes are wrong.

I think this is a great jam entry. Well done.