I've had the pleasure of seeing JMJerbear's writing evolve over the past year or so, and I really enjoyed his Novembear entry— a sci-fi story about duty, resourcefulness, and gay space animals.
The gameplay segment in the middle provided a nice contrast from the narrative segments. Besides perhaps whittling down the narrative segment a little to aid in the flow of the story, this VN is pretty solid
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