Great dialog, great storyline as far as it goes.
I'm not a huge fan of the aheago face, but otherwise I really liked the drawn images.
Whilst I understand putting the BDSM scene first, it does rather take away the anticipation of the plot development (which is well balanced otherwise, IMHO).
Anyway, very much awaiting the next chapter.
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