I like your quirky stories, and so far, I think this one is my favorite. From the very beginning, seeing cantankerous old coots trying to outdo each other had me remembering real-life encounters I've witnessed. As someone who has family members who care for old people, NEVER mess with their Bingo!
The artwork is quite appropriate; drawing in monochrome makes the scene feel old-timey, amd the extremely limited use of color. I loved the bear in his trenchcoat and the robin in his bath robe. Also it was such an interesting choice having the wheelchair-bound Robin being the bully and aggressor. I can't get over how much I like the implementation of the grappler into his shenanigans.
For full disclosure for others reading this review, I did make a couple of music tracks for this and some basic proofreading for grammatical issues, but this was entirely Peppekz's writing and creative direction. (Also, no worries on calling me Jembear! š)
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