Disappointing, really, This was one of the "good" games that a comment from my favorite game recommended this, so I got on with it, expecting a good easy to get hooked to story.
I really tried to get into it but the story bores me until the end of the demo where it gets more interesting. Well I don't know where should I start. This is just a demo so I cant really judge all of them
First of all, the mini game mechanism is boring.. I don't want to experience the dread feeling of time going through with everyday average normal life. Nothing interesting is happening or even worth mentioning for 90% of the part. We literally got nothing, I wanted to skip them all but then I convinced myself to try and at least gave it a chance, and I regretted it so much.
There are no action until the end. seriously, I'd love it if you throw me right into the action part then immediately transferred me back about 2 days ago or something, but no, It's just a normal life with work and hang around boring characters. The writing is a trying-hard but it's not good at all or fit into the plot
Secondly, the characters are all clumped together, I don't care about their names or personality, I can't even see their name since it blended in with the black color of the box! I'm easy with the dialogues but gotta say there's nothing worth talking about them, have you ever try reading a book of humor?
Third, pretty basic game, maybe it's your first time trying renpy or something, try customize a bit more and at least put a little bit of more effort in. I already have to put up with the horrible artstyle and the basic 3D looking background, but all of the unnecessary description of every darn thing that I don't need and might not even relevant later on just pisses me off.
Maybe because your audience having low taste or I just had too much expectations for the game after being recommended this similar to a good game that I like, I felt so scammed the hell out by this game, you HAVE TO pay me to play this because ain't no way anyone can convince me to ever give the games with bad art a second chance EVER again.
Thanks and I hope you'll grow and improve from all of this, everyone has a first try but probably it's best that not every SHOULD try.
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