This is probably going to be a 4 out of 5 but I'm enjoying it so far. It seems like it was improving within the novel so that was nice. I think the hardest part of this game is just going to be making the market aware of it. I like the visuals but Yumi isn't as "hot" as I think some people would want. But I enjoyed the game and to be honest I think that is the only real complaint I can think of. But I do think her design is nice but she just feels off. She is definitely hot but it seems like most people want that 11/10 look in this market. But I'm leaving a 5 out of 5 for this because it feels like you care about it and I don't get that from a lot of the VN on itch so great job and I hope you continue the work.
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