Hello I read your post on Patreon and am leaving you my review and thoughts on Daybreak Nightbreak.

I think the plot to the game is very unique overall though I can see some similarities as well to other novels I have played, and that is perfectly fine I feel like you do a great job at putting your own spin to the idea of a game that uses both fantasy and modern world technology.

If I could give any critique it would be I felt like chapter one happens so fast and though I wouldn't be shocked if new things get added later, I also feel like this story still has so much to unfold and hope that this doesn't end up a shorter novel.If it should be decided to be s short novel  I would hope there ends up being a sequel to show more of the world you are building.