I haven't played this game, but it sounds very interesting after reading it. And I'm not even particularly into the noir genre! But I love the vivid images of the use of red, the suggestion to use all the senses when describing, of focusing on a single detail.
The only thing I miss a bit is maybe some prompts or ideas for the investigation scenes. Especially for those of us who aren't fully into the genre, it would be very useful!
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