Nice. Builds up decently but then ends at a bad place. Feels like it's ending in the middle of something. The whole demo doesn't give any real satisfaction from the buildups that it does. It does multiple buildups and doesn't fulfill any of those. The only ones that fulfills are the ones that are in the moment, not for the future.

The basics are nice. The story is interesting. I like that MC is smart. That's uncommon in media.

I feel the music choice is OK but it's too short and loops too often.