uninteresting slice-of-life. This story was definitely padded with more words than plot. They're definitely needs to be way more interesting things that happened in this Slice of Life. The relationship was not complex enough to grab your attention and the day you had with a cute girl was below average. Definitely needs to be more substance to the visual novel story structure then what it has right now. Things I definitely can say good about this is the Artistry is excellent. The backgrounds are absolutely beautiful. Very much so works of art. Seen very few visual novels that spend the amount of detail in the backgrounds is this Vision novel does. Overall something great to look at but not great to read through.
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