Love to see a polished writer at play, although I think we saw more of a `fanfic` (I know it was OC, I'm talking vibe-wise) with some visuals than a work making full use of the medium. Which is understandable for a first work. Still quite excellent. Breezed through it because it was such a smooth ride.

You know someone's done a good job when have items like initially disliking one of the characters (Roan) but then get to see through other aspects how they can be likeable for the protagonist to want to marry them.

Some adjustments of the audio and some of the sprite work changes and you've got a killer work (more so than it already was).