This was incredibly cute. Mainly due to Aubrie being so damn adorable, both thanks to the art (all those character poses) and because of their bouncing personality!

This another May Wolf entry where a choice was made to employ no narration whatsoever, everything is communicated through dialogue and visuals alone. I think this works really well in the mall scene (which is the main and biggest chunk of the VN). I really loved the whole section.

I do think the beginning and end suffer a bit though. The beginning is pretty confusing and in general the pacing in the beginning and ending scenes feel too fast because there is nothing in between dialogue lines. But overall I quite enjoyed the story.