the framework was cool, but overall it feels like a mediocre story that falls flat. something like a practice run or writing warmup than a proper, fully fledged story, which--given the restrictions, is understandable. still, nothing to write home about. 

it's supposed to be standalone despite connected to other universe, but it feels too washed out under these restrictions. these characters are meaningless to me and i have nothing to feel for the endings.

the art is very nice.