Nice story of self realization after breaking through the noise of life herding the Arisa into a place she did not want to be.  The characters did feel real despite the limited rush to put a whole story in this limited space. The art style complements the story well, the setting is real but the characters are beautifully sketched in as though they do not really belong to their surroundings. Overall really good, I guess I don't read books enough to see tropes or cliches and it really just takes pictures for me to get to reading so I personally appreciate the medium of delivery for your work.