I love psychological horror and romance, so this was a cool blend of those genres. For me, the writing is perfect! Manny is such an interesting character, and his verbosity suits his character well. The story has a good length and pacing, and I was engaged from start to end. I wasn't entirely sure how much I could trust Manny after a couple minutes in, and it was intriguing to see the apparent reality of the situation contradict what he says until the curtain was finally lowered, which was a satisfying moment. Even after the twist was revealed, I was unsure of how the story would end, but I was curious to see how such a shocking situation would pan out. Great job!