Very good art and set up, and a lot of the technical aspects were improved, like when the game automatically sets you back to a choice when you see an ending. I will say it felt a bit limited in the options of beating the bad guys, and there were less endings in a paid VN compared to ones that were free from before. Overall, a good step forward and I can't wait to see the future installments.
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