This was an enjoyable read, though it was a bit awkward at times. Lillian's attraction for Inna seems to be, for the most part, unwarranted and random; possibly rushed?
I definitely don't feel like it was touched on enough, it kinda just seemed like she randomly fell in love with Inna and most of the development of their "relationship" was just Inna being clueless of that fact. It would have been much more satisfying to see the romance run it's course, steadily developing and blooming. Instead we just got a "Hmm she's being weird. Oh, maybe she's in love with me? Oh, she's in love with me...." roll credits.
It also sucks that one of the endings isn't even finished. Not sure if this project is abandoned, but the game *is* pretty old at this point.
If you've got an hour to kill, I'd say maybe give it a go. The issues I have are likely very subjective, and I'm sure the right type of person would probably find this enjoyable and satisfying.
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