Solid first and short game, 3d models are good quality, animations could use some work but understand the difficulty to work with Daz3d, story could use some thinking cause few stuff made no sense due to their age, i would advice to continue a bit more the game cause you have an extra lady you can use.
itch.io is an open marketplace for independent game creators. It's completely free to upload your content. Read more about what we're trying to accomplish and the features we provide.