this game is awesome and has really heart felt moments. Not to mention the amazing father thundercock. With the story being pretty deep and complex I would like to say one thing about its story. I think the story is very interesting, however the means of which the readers are fed the story can get a bit convoluted at times. Right now I am at chapter 21 (or 22 i think) and there is already still plenty of unanswered question, but within this chapter, more questions are just being added due to meeting more characters that add subtle comments here and there. I dont think that's necessarily a bad thing, it just could definitely be handled better by perhaps answering some of the backlog of mysteries that the reader already has on their mind before adding onto it. Or maybe just not mention it until it's a bit more prevalent in the story. I'm no writer but I figured I would just give you my perspective from the readers pov.

for the combat, i think you have a great idea going but could definitely be polished a bit here and there. Here are some suggestions i have that would definitely be some qol for the players. 
1. have a skip/ pass turn option, rather than having to resort to guarding.
2. rather than clicking on an interactable in the middle of the screen with the name of the character, you could just click on the party memeber's icon in the combat submenu
3. starting off the combat with cj just allocating mana to a character gets a bit redundant with just one party member. I assume the plan going forward is to manage that mana between multiple members, but it does feel a bit strange to have to do that. I get the system linked to the lore but as a combat mechanic it feels kind of weird

overall this is a great game and im loving the jokes and stale memes, I think you have plenty of room to grow and show the skills and ideas you have stored within yourselves, but this is already so beautiful. Thanks for providing this work of art for free because I've paid for less than half of what you have created. Keep up the awesome work and I'm excited to see how far you go!