10/10 art

10/10 Story line and plot (so far)

10/10 Dynamics 

10/10 Pacing 

So far on The story itself, it has good pacing, the timings for the mini, scenes and dialogue are great making the back and forth of them not flat.  I haven't noticed some grammar issues too (I think). Tho I recommend to add in the future a silhouette or an obvious hint on what the MC is (the theory is a tiger; due to the dialogue with Kim). Either way the overall game is a 10 for me.  And this needs more Publicity too, this is a Diamond in the rough.