It's hard to give feedback as the machine translation adds some difficulty to understanding a lot of elements in the story, but I'll try to give some feedback. I've also read the original version of Chapter 1, for reference.

The pacing feels way too fast, making a lot of things lack weight; a good example is with the visit to the church to see Ciel, it felt more natural in the original version since it added some neat world-building, while in the remaster, it just zooms through the church scene. 

However, the new visuals for chapter 1 and in chapter 2 are much better, and the new art is also great. Giving Margariti a new sprite when activating her magic was a really good addition.