I went through all the endings~! I thought the visual effects were interesting, and the writing segments during NVL mode were enjoyable to read. I think it was due to the time constraints of the game jam, but I felt some areas in the story could've been more developed and expanded on, as I liked the idea you had going for the work, but to me, it fell a tad flat in the end.
One small gripe was that the text size was a little too tiny on my 2k monitor. Maybe as a suggestion, if any updates were made in the future... you could add text size adjustments. Since I attempted to use default Ren'Py's accessibility options, but it sort of broke the entire interface on me, and so I was forced to reset it back and read the VN how it was.
The character design (and chosen colour palette on them) was neat.
I like reading unclear narratives, so this was a fairly fun experience for sure.
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