hey man, just read it and this is a pretty solid start! Obviously I read the ENG version as i don't know Chinese, that probably affected my score as more of the sayings like "be 6 of 12 and ill be half a dozen" got lost in translation. The premise is good if a bit bland, the whole creepy dream thing has been done by many others. BUT, depending on how you steer the story it can surpass its tropey beginning! I'll absolutely be keeping tabs on this VN as I like what foundations are being written! Good luck, in your writing endeavors!