I think the tone was good, the constant droning in the background made it a bit more interesting. The actual mechanics and point of the game, however, are a bit more dull. The having to close your eyes mechanic in the shower is a predictable one, and having it be the main draw is not all that good in terms of staying power. A little more lime building up to this moment in the shower or even just more nights with a steady build up of unnerving noises would go a long way. This game has a great atmosphere that could easily be grafted onto a more fleshed out vision.
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