Loved the concept and the relatable struggles of the characters however I found the pacing to be incredibly, with lot's of empty moments where I had explored talking to my friends, and throwing every object in the car, and felt really bored. Unfortunately the scenary is all the same, so gazing out the window was a bit unfulfilling. I was also a bit thrown by spoken word advertisements, with clear amatuer voice actors, particularly since none of the main dialogue is voiced and think it would have been improved with music along (which was all great). The conversations themselves didn't flow particularly well, and felt stunted - like someone who isn't familiar with that kind of writing. The most disappointing thing for me, was when I went to take a selfie with the polaroid, and discovered I was a vampire.
Overall some real potential, and I think it could really benefit from some polish. It seems the creators are more familiar with games, rather than stories, and I'm interested to see what they do with more experience.