+More detailed Art.

Better resolution & personal style for each character instead of just being a color. More music that fits the moods in the novel.

-Empty Emotional Words.

Words that tells the reader/player to feel something rather than making the reader feel something. Writing "She is so preacious" or "She Makes you feel she cares about you" (No quotes from the novel but just examples.) rather than showing with actions by a character. Just because the novel says the protagonist feels something it does't mean it's conveyed to the reader / player. 

+Unpredictable Character Progression & Plot. 

Resonable conflicts in the story that steers new actions with characters relatable to the protagonist.

-lack of meaningful character development.

Most love interest problems either solves right away by just entering the void. When there is a problem there is no tension. Just hype with a quick release which makes the problems feel lackluster like problems were not really problems at all.

+ First person story telling focus (-breaks immersion at times when randomly get into 3rd person & when confused by being in first person in other characters other than the protagonist.)

Rather have one form of story telling to not misslead or break immersion or let people know it's nothing for them from the start.

Also healthy to be used to 1st person in adult content so people can have a healthy life irl.

+ Valuable Adult Content.

Focus on attractive parts of the girls, more story & bonding with the love interests/characters  before any adult scenes.

What would make this novel become 5 star:

Option to only follow a 1st person narrative/story telling;

Enough Personalized Sacreficial Interactions to make the love interests be attractive to care about.