Ramil is hot af. Tala is so pretty! I used to have her specific fashion style and look personally so I resonated with her on the character design aspect. The writing, the switch to Godot is whoaa.. splendid adaptability! The music is Chef's kiss. The background! The background art illustrations are so pretty and well done. I played this game without knowing what the plot summary is (I downloaded it immediately without looking at the game page that much anymore. Yes, I was that excited lol). So I haven't had an idea of what the plot was about until Ramil encounters the rising action which is where he was at the sea and there were mermaids involved in the lore. It took some time before I realized that this is set in a fairy tale-fiction setting (and forgot this is for the OUAT jam lol). So the pacing may be what I could recommend improving. I want to cosplay Tala so bad I hope I can squeeze her in for this year's plans 🤩Great work!