Im currently going through the game as i type but figured i should stop and make a few small things apparent: 
a) till Moirai is introduced Martins sprite is never shown
Edit: Charles and Girl who lost her glasses sprites are never shown throughtout the games

b)on my second and last loop and after choosing to talk to the girl  lost her glasses, the game had ran through that section twice
c)there are some backround images that dont align correctly like the kitching and the road
d) in a choice with Moirai when the player chooses "How do i get out of this loop?" Moirai initiall responds with "*full Explaination Here* before jumping into the explaination; also in the explaination the word Threshold is misspelled

Most of these things dont affect the game in any huge way and it was a cute, short and fun play! im not exactly sure what exactly fixed the time problem plot wise but it was still cute and fun!
I enjoyed it and would love to see more works! Keep it up ^.^