I honestly didn't like this game at all. Good idea, terrible execution. (SPOILER ALERT!)
The graphics looked like they were drawn with MS Paint and sprite proportions are way off, Heads look more like eggs, and I could go on. The rooms and monsters do look neat in concept, but still.
The pacing's also a big problem. Half the cast abruptly vanish depending on your route and are basically never heard from again. It goes way too fast, so reveals and character development lack foreshadowing. Well, if you call "abruptly confessing to violent murder that Alex somehow doesn't cut off all ties to them immediately for shock value" character development.
Worst are the characters. Hardly anyone's likable. Marjorie can barely go two sentences without mentioning cookies and it gets really annoying. Evan spends his whole screentime basically screaming with his appearance and personality that he's a bad guy, and yet the game expects you to be surprised when he turns out to be a bad guy.
I hope you can improve from here. That's my honest opinion.
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