You all incorporated gameplay and story very well. There's a universal Asian experience in here that even I can appreciate.
The awkwardnesses are still there in the cooking sections, but the dialogue with your uncles and great grandparents is never too much. It's a good depiction of someone who's make their peace.
Then again, Mei might me a bit too secure. It never quite felt like she was scarred. Though I imagine your intention was exactly that. It's hard to critique someone for "not being sad enough," after all. Your own story is quite effective.
The art is dreamy and beautiful. It never overstays its welcome or looks too orientalist. The music is even more incredible. Thank you.
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