Overall very polished. The art, sounds, character movement are all very good. I liked how each character has their own little voice thing they do every once in a while.
My only gripe is how the horny stuff sometimes intrudes on the serious moments. The biggest issue I had was when Aldara helped Arthur down from his "panic attack" and then immediately shoved another stressful situation on him. That's usually something a good friend wouldn't do to someone and makes Aldara look a little bad. There should at least be a cooldown period where Aldara and Arthur talk some more and Arthur goes back to normal more before the guards come in.
Overall, though, pretty fun and interesting story. Love the horror aspects.
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