I like the game. I think it has great potential and the stuff you want to tell it's interesting and promising. But there is something that bothers me a lot. The way the characters interact with the MC is too erratic. In one moment they are talking about normal stuff, and in the other, they are talking about philosophical stuff out of nowhere. I think you need to calm down a bit and take your time to write longer dialogs. You don't need to dump everything at once, just make them have random talks here and there. If you keep this up, the plot is going to get too convoluted, and in the future, you won't be able to write consistent dialog. 

Other than that, the game is pretty good. 

Godspeed and I hope you continue to develop this game. It's good.