Reached the end of 0.11 it seems. Two stars for the story itself. There is not enough vore in it, so minus one star, and I cringed a bit too much at a lot of thing, so minus another star. And obviously since I couldn't finish the story, I can't give the fifth star.

I like the story, from Rachel to the P.I.S.S ... but yeah, I came here for the vore, and was left disappointed.