It's a pretty visual novel with lovely art and a sad plot, I like how you worded the story and how you drew Lady Violetta and the faceless maid of honor. While I know it's because the maid of honor is for the MC, to me it signals that now that Lady Violetta is abandoning her relationship with MC she can no longer "see" the MC she loves because of her decision and that MC doesn't want Lady Violetta to see the pain she is in. Honestly, tragic, love how it turned out other than some issues I had with the visual novel!