As of part 2 version 0.12

The story is ok, at times it feels disjointed and has trouble flowing from scene to scene. The grammar is okay, containing a decent amount of typos/misspellings, along with it having a minimal amount of punctuation and a lot of awkward dialog that should be rephrased. (Note that the problems with the grammar that I am mentioning is not the intentional broken English given to the children or the Japanese characters. ) There also appears to be the occasional wrong namebox for characters. The scenes are okay, containing a small amount of animation, along with no sound for nearly all of the scenes. There doesn't appear to be much clipping in regards to body parts or clothing.

No walkthrough is needed all choices are simple. The game doesn't really have music or a gallery unless you add mods for part one.

There are multiple different patches for the game available should one wish to add them.

Overall I rate the game a 3/5. The grammar and the scenes could be improved as the grammar got worse the further into the game you got. The scenes could be better by adding sound and having less flashes of white I swear every scene has at least 10 flashes.(The flashing is toned down a bit in part 2 and eventually disappears in the later parts of the game.) The game also really needs music. The game also has a decent amount of 4th wall breaks which I personally wasn't a fan of but other people may find humorous.