For a very first game - not bad. Not good also, but not bad. The concept is there but the implementation is not great. What happened to them? What haunting the mother? Why the ending is all black and text only? Why the location is so unnessesary huge? Etc. Still, not bad for a first game. Will definitely follow. I believe devs can and will improve.
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