That was surprisingly good! Ngl, the premise didn't hook me at all, I think the puns and memes are quite overdone in the beginning, but as I went further in the story it started hooking me more and more (and the puns and memes became funnier bc they were used less)! The side story is really great as well (Lynne x Akila best ship), and the characters are great! The mystery of Neim's curse, although interesting, wasn't as satisfying to solve as I wished, but I like how it brought all of the main cast together.

Overall, nice job, couldn't have asked for a better introduction to your VNs! Meme Detective's the next step now ig ^^