i used to love to play IF, but during that time i was also quite the lurker, so  i never really commented, but i remember playing this 2 years ago and loving it, my eyes were glued to the screen, i was constantly trying to think what was the best choice i could make, the way you write is beautiful. im not good with words, maybe thats why i never really commented on the games i played, but ive always admired people who do this kind of thing, art i mean. i know its hard, it used to be a dream of mine haha. sorry, its the middle of the night for me and i guess im just thinking about how insignificant life can be, but reading stories like this make me feel less insignificant, maybe in this life ive lived thousands through books, even when in reality im just living one. i hope youre doing well, i dont mind that you've taken a hiatus, i just really hope that youre taking care of yourself, and i hope youre doing things on your own time. many people create beautiful things, beautiful things that end up never being seen. im glad you decided to post this though, to publish your writing even though its not complete. im grateful to have read this, its a beautiful game and i cherish it. its one of the first ive ever played, so i guess it means a lot to me. im sorry it took me so long to rate it, i guess it slipped my mind, but i was going through my collection and i saw it, i remembered how much i liked it, so really, thank you.