It has a lot of potential! but I feel like there should be just a tad bit more to the story like outside the cafe or if the character stayed at the coffee shop and just found a seat, but this is just a suggestion! I'm not a game designer or anything but I've played a lot but that's off topic- I'm not a designer or story-teller by any means! so I don't know how difficult any of this is :) besides all that, it's a great game and has a lot if attention to details in the script!