This game is really fun, and I found myself laughing a few times (mainly at Jack's expense).

The length is short and sweet (though I'd be lying if I said I didn't want to know more about them!) It was just enough to give us a snapshot into the world & how the characters live their lives. 

The art is beautiful. I'd love to see this style in more VNs.  All of the expressions were dynamic and not flat. I really liked Jack's "off button" expression. The backgrounds were detailed and felt like part of the scene, instead of just a backdrop.

The music is really nice to listen to, rather than just something that vaguely exists in the background. It helped tie everything together, and I appreciated when the music would pause or change when something new happened.

For a first-time vn/game it was really great & fun. I hope to see more things from you in the future (if you want, no pressure) ^^