A short story FVN with a dark twist... that reads as confused about its identity. So Long as we both shall live lacks confidence of its identity; the spooky elements are underutilized and the dark comedy is just as inconsistent. Had this work leaned confidently one way or the other, it could have been far more interesting. As it stands, works well enough, but its wasted potential hurts the final product in unavoidable ways.
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