So far, a very well thought out story with wonderfully drawn art! What you see is what you get at the moment, but I'd love to see more of this project grow. My only complaint is that the author and creator seems to have gone silent for a little while now. Life happanes, and that's fine, but I would hope that you get to read this and know that you have a wonderful story here that I would love to continue. Either here in this format or as one of your chose your own adventure stories that you've written.