Damn. This was just what I needed right now. Such a powerful use of form, the uses of Twine is perfect here. The hyperlinks space out each moment perfectly. By limiting the story to dialogue, text is used in a way that wouldn't work in any other medium, yet creates a perfect, unsettling atmosphere. And the themes here really resonate. The metaphors are powerful without ever feeling on-the-nose or taking away from the naturalness of the dialogue (or it's intentional unnaturalness in places). Truly excellent work. Reminds me why I want to tell stories.