gameplay: not an awful lot in this game, choices are minimal, but the chance for them to carry over is amazing!
Visuals: There are a few weird things like with the arms but otherwise very good western cartoony style.
story: I loved the story, it was enrapturing, to say the least. I didn't expect a silly little romance with a harem, or for the dragon bandit ruby to become likable. (Though Tari is stilly my favorite)

Notes: love that everyone refers to ??? the doll girl as a little girl, it implies we may get to see some fake-loli or at least light-loli with her. which would be good as the only real critique I can say so far is that the body types in the girls are mostly the same, their good don't get me wrong, and there is some subtle difference between Tari and Jilly, but otherwise all the women have very similar boob and butt sizes. Not really a big deal, just something small I noticed.

other than that, keep up the good work I'll be keeping my eye out for this one