I enjoyed this short little VN. I'm a sucker for gay villainess stuff and this very much scratched that itch while also having the way she defrosts feel super realistic. I love the art and the little CG right at the end. Seeing more of this and seeing the world expanded would be super cool, and the personality of Beatrix especially was super well realised, she felt like a fleshed out character in a bad situation. I feel like Lily didn't get a lot of characterisation which was unfortunate, because while I really thought the two were cute, some things about Lily felt kind of annoying because she was constantly referencing the real world, even after who knows how long living in that world.
There was one big issue I found with this though and it was how text lines were handled. I'm not sure how you did the text effect but it unfortunately meant that when text was appearing on the screen, the bottom of some letters like y and g would be cut off as if the next line was being covered and the spacing was causing whatever was covering them to cut off these letters. It was definitely rather noticable during the whole read-through. I've added a screenshot for context.
Overall I enjoyed this, I hate 5 star rating systems because a 3/5 feels so harsh for how much I still enjoyed the romance between Beatrix and Lily.

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